Outline for my essay

So the following is my outline for my research paper, should I make any adjusments?  

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v  Introduction

§  hook

§  Thesis Statement

v  Body

Ø  Explanation of Addiction              

§  Definition on Internet Addiction

§  Science behind Addiction (any kind)

Ø  Drawbacks of being addicted to something

§  Explanation

·        Example (me)

§  Details

Ø  Positive outcomes of addiction

§  Job opportunity

§  Social aspects

Ø   Youtube

§  Pewdiepie

§  Cry

§  People can make money off of this

Ø  Why is it addicting

§  Statistics of games played online

·        World of War craft

·        Runescape

·        Steam

Ø  How we can go about fixing the problem

§  Groups set to helping

§  Getting someone to help you

Ø  Why Internet addiction is different from others?

v  Conclusion

§  Summary of my Points

§  Restate Thesis Statement